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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 2:13 PM
palkia1
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 2:22 PM
DragonMewGirl
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 2:28 PM
Shaymin97
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 2:46 PM
air
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 3:41 PM
WAIT YOU'RE LUNA ON SRO?! Duuuude I knew your art was familiar!
This looks wicked awesome by the way
Luna C. Tsukario
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 5:00 PM
hey heeeyyy luna~ :'3 <3
Luna C. Tsukario
@ Wednesday, June 24th 2009, 7:11 PM
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Friday, February 27th 2009, 8:09 PM
doran-dragon
@ Friday, February 27th 2009, 8:41 PM
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 6:52 PM
kafytafy
@ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 9:18 PM
Lugia
@ Thursday, February 26th 2009, 8:48 AM
Shaymin97
@ Thursday, February 26th 2009, 6:30 PM
polka dots
@ Friday, February 27th 2009, 12:24 PM
dragonsgem
@ Tuesday, March 17th 2009, 10:06 AM
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:22 PM
Murkrow
@ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:28 PM
bibbetcj
@ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:28 PM
That is some nice lineart! and colouring ha ha <3
dratini_dragonite
@ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 1:00 AM
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Friday, May 30th 2008, 6:59 PM
Suki-chan
@ Friday, May 30th 2008, 7:02 PM
Kiana
@ Friday, May 30th 2008, 7:08 PM
Hikari
@ Saturday, May 31st 2008, 1:03 AM
Hey, welcome back! xD
R-Rico is so CUTE gahh they're purple. ......I love purple.
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Friday, February 29th 2008, 10:31 PM
draco_darkrai
@ Friday, February 29th 2008, 11:31 PM
Treeco
@ Saturday, March 1st 2008, 6:04 AM
Saetch
@ Saturday, March 1st 2008, 8:02 AM
girlpokemonfan_fire
@ Saturday, March 1st 2008, 2:40 PM
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Monday, February 25th 2008, 7:50 PM
Neko
@ Monday, February 25th 2008, 7:57 PM
Cerulean
@ Monday, February 25th 2008, 8:45 PM
Aww, it looks so cute!
girlpokemonfan_fire
@ Monday, February 25th 2008, 9:00 PM
Kinda reminds me of how Starly draws.... Very nice though. =D
Luna C. Tsukario
@ Tuesday, February 26th 2008, 11:20 AM
Starly is our super awesome admin. You do have a style it's just it somehow reminds me of hers... But you two's styles are so cool and awesome.
Luna C. Tsukario
@ Tuesday, February 26th 2008, 1:07 PM
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Sunday, February 24th 2008, 9:32 PM
So adorable! ;-; I wanna hug 'em...
xRewind
@ Monday, February 25th 2008, 5:54 PM
Adorable :]
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Luna C. Tsukario
@ Saturday, January 26th 2008, 2:26 PM
HyoutaKunGirlfriend
@ Saturday, January 26th 2008, 2:34 PM
Sui
@ Saturday, January 26th 2008, 2:57 PM
neko-san
@ Saturday, January 26th 2008, 3:55 PM
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I dun know what to say, but good luck~
First off the lighting is a little... Skewed? I'm not sure how to say it but it seems a little indirect. Where exactly is your light source? Next, I'd have to say that these are very simplistic pokemon (they're mostly circles with a few distinctions) and don't showcase much anatomy. A more detailed subject might be better. Then there's your perspective which seems really funky in the water, and your background is very... Simple. I'd suggest putting more details and shading.
I probably should have done something more anatomically challenging though.
but yeah, there's something odd going on with the perspective ;A;
@Gengarfreaks; I didn't rush on this. Not to get defensive or anything but...yea. xD;
Mmmkay, first, the crits and observations, then the verdict.
Colouring:
It's okay, nothing too wowing or superb. I do like the way you've done the water, those colours are quite nice~
One thing I mustmustMUST point out is that when it comes to the background, there's really no shading, which is a bit disappointing. I'd really like to see some more shading on the background.
One thing I've noticed about the way you colour is that you're quick to go for the shadows. I dunno, but I would almost expect more lighter tones on Marril, seeing as it's pretty much a sphere. Oh, on that note, the way you've shaded it makes it look, well...not spherical. I think that the curvy-twurvy lines that define tones is a bit unnecessary; a good ol' simple curve would have done just fine~
You seem to have a decent grasp on shading, so I don't feel the need to go too far into that.
:3
Anatomy:
Not...much...here...Pro apps normally have something with a bit more difficult anatomy; the Dragonite picture you did would have been a better pick because then we really get to see what you can handle when it comes to anatomy.
I think you realize this though, reading your comments.
Background:
Yeah, way too simple, and it TOTALLY throws the perspective off. Again, I'd be beating a dead horse going into it.
Overall Ability:
I'm just not wowed. Your stuff is nice to look at, and it's definitely Main Board worthy, but as for the Pro Board...I just don't think you're ready yet.
One thing I would like to see more of is complexity with your colouring. You seem to go for a three-tone approach in a lot of your pieces, sometimes less, and while I'm not very good with solids myself, I think you could use maybe 5 or 6 shades and give it that much more depth~
Another thing I'd like to see is more complexity in your composition. This is the only piece of yours that has a complicated background that interacts with the subjects. Funky colour effects and patterns are dandy and all, but you will need to do something more than that in order to really nail a Pro Board picture.
So, my verdict is no, but you're close~